The Sword of Moira (Proofreading)

Last updated on October 3, 2025

A Book By Author Stephanie B. Whitfield

Another brilliant book by one of my favourite authors. Thank you to Stephanie B. Whitfield for giving me the opportunity to work with her on this one. Looking forward to the next book in this series.

The Goal

Proofreading and Formatting for a book called The Sword of Moira by Stephanie B. Whitfield, a US-based author of Paranormal Romance & fantasy books.

• Book Title: The Sword of Moira
• Genre: YA Epic Fantasy
• Author Name: The Sword of Moira
• Amazon:
• Book link:

The Challenge

• Excessive use of adverbs.
• Spelling errors.
• Punctuation errors.
• Unformatted chapter headings and paragraph indents.

The Solution

• Uses track changes on MS Word & suggesting mode on Google docs, so client can accept or reject any changes in the document.
• adds suggestions for removing excessive adverbs and replacing them with alternative words.
• Corrects spellings, grammar and syntax as per Chicago Manual of Style guidelines.
• Adds formatting to chapter headings and paragraph indent/alignment as per Chicago Manual of Style guidelines

Feedback from the Author

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